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220: What is and What Should Never be

Prompters, leave a quote from this episode as a comment.
Writers, choose from any prompt and write a story inspired by the quote.

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*FYI - Dean's girlfriend 'Carmen' from this episode will be starring in a new show airing this fall called Combat Hospital! And she's playing ... you guessed it - a nurse! *

Definitions, by kausingkayn Dean: "All I can think about is how much this job’s cost us."
Electric Sheep, by monicawoe  Dean: "No, asshat. The Djinn. The uh, scary creature. Remember?"
Sometimes, by monicawoe Dean: "I don't think you're real."


Jun. 18th, 2011 02:35 am (UTC)
Electric Sheep
(set pre 6x01 - what did Sam see when the Djinn poisoned him?)

Sam feels the venom seeping through his skin. He's annoyed that he wasn't fast enough to avoid the Djinn's hand. He'd been so preoccupied with fighting the first one off that he hadn't noticed her sibling sneaking up behind him.

The Djinn's fingers tighten one last time and then release. Sam's vision blurs.

There is a light. It gets brighter and brighter. Sam tries to close his eyes but they're already closed. He tries to turn over, presses his face into the cement floor of the basement, but the light shines through the cracks in the floor and the cracks are getting wider.

Sam's eyes are forced open and he sees himself but he's made of light. He burns, he burns and it's brighter than fire, brighter than the sun and Sam doesn't want to see but he can't stop staring.

"You remember." says the light.

"No." Sam says. He struggles to keep his grip. His right hand slides free and falls forward as another piece of the floor breaks away and tumbles, down and into the light.

"Yes. You do." his other self says and it grins. Its smile is a thousand miles wide and it breaks the floor even further.

"I don't want to. I'm free. I'm free." Sam feels his left leg slip down and dip towards the light as the floor collapses under his weight.

The light laughs.

Sam starts to fall.

There's pain. Something in his leg-- a needle. The world fades back to darkness.

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Jun. 18th, 2011 12:17 pm (UTC)
Re: Electric Sheep
Glad you liked it!
I think soulless!Sam has quite a few stories left to tell.
Jun. 19th, 2011 10:52 pm (UTC)
Re: Electric Sheep
Ooh. In my head, this is in anime form. Heee.
Jun. 19th, 2011 11:37 pm (UTC)
Re: Electric Sheep
That would be most excellent - especially for budgetary reasons, lol.
Jul. 2nd, 2011 09:48 pm (UTC)
Re: Electric Sheep
This went so deep without you ever having to dig - the gentle way you just grazed over this aspect of Soulless!Sam was like opening a jar and letting your audience look in without describing the contents - it was perfect.
Jul. 3rd, 2011 03:01 am (UTC)
Re: Electric Sheep
So glad you liked it! Soulless-Sam has many more stories to tell, I feel.